Rosemary Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Hi all, I need your help. I am trying to organise walks in our area of the Western Cape. Can you pleeeease have a look at the attached poster and give your feedback. Any help will be appreciated. These will be going up on the notice board at our supermarket as well as the vets in the area. Thx Thanks Andy for the template ps Sounds a bit formal? too many questions? Walks for husky owners.doc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valkyries Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 sorry Rosemary but i can't open it xxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosemary Posted August 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Sorry Linda, its an MS Word doc. It is on a Husky Owners letterhead with the tear-off slips at the bottom, the wording is as follows: A fun, friendly and informative forum, built by Siberian Husky owners, for Siberian Husky owners JOIN US FOR WALKS Do you have a Husky who needs to go for long walks to use up all that energy? Would you be interested in meeting up with other Husky owners in the area for walks in the nearby forests or surroundings? JOIN THE INTERNATIONAL FAMILY OF HUSKY OWNERS Do you need help or advice with your Husky, or would you just like to chat with other Husky lovers? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valkyries Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 i think thats fine it's to the point and inviting xxxxx good luck Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arlene5548 Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 think it could benefit from a pic or two fo a husky to make it a wee bit more eye catching?....otherwise its good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lil Miss Bump Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 thats's really good hun! maybe a picture but really good hope it gets some responses and you get some good new friends over there xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tikaani&Aiyana Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Thats great! Hope you gets lots of people to come Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mazz Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 Rosemary, I think the content is all there, but the format is a bit difficult to take in. The following text would be much easier to read and follow if it were not centered on the page (scroll down to see it all): Do you have a Husky who needs to go for long walks to use up all that energy? Would you be interested in meeting up with other Husky owners in the area for walks in the nearby forests or surroundings? Do you need help or advice with your Husky, or would you just like to chat with other Husky lovers? But instead, were listed as follows: Do you have a Husky who needs to go for long walks to use up all that energy? Would you be interested in meeting up with other Husky owners in the area for walks in the nearby forests or surroundings? Do you need help or advice with your Husky, or would you just like to chat with other Husky lovers? The tearoffs at the bottom appear to have a shadowed font. I'd use a non-shadowed font. Great idea. Best of luck starting a new tradition. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah Posted August 1, 2010 Report Share Posted August 1, 2010 i agree with mazz - the content is all there and wording is fab just needs to be a bit more eye catching - if it looks like there's a bit to read people won't stop and take the time to - one liner's bullet pointed in a way would be good Really hope you get lots of people coming forward hun xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosemary Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Thanks Dave, will do as you suggest. Hopefully this works ............ will let you know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slaves to kaya Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Why dont we just organise a husky meet at your place I am sure you can cope with 2000+ members and their dogs in your garden lol . Best of luck with the poster It looks fab xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andy Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 I've taken the liberty of editing as Mazz and Sarah suggested and Added some pictures, Coz Pics always "Grab the Eyes" People will always look at something with Pictures and will skip over pure text. Hope this helps Walks for husky owners andy Revised.doc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosemary Posted August 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 That's awesome - thanks for your help Andy, much appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparks Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Looks really good, hope you get lots of replies from it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boshka Posted August 2, 2010 Report Share Posted August 2, 2010 Looks great, I hope you get lots of people going and don't forget pics Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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